There are these lights. Bright lights.
There are these echoes. Loud echoes.
There are these winds. Cold winds.
There is this moon. Beautiful moon.
There are these people. Happy people.
There are these promises. Fake promises.
There is this hour. A lonely hour.
There are these tears. Unseen tears.
There are these dreams. Broken dreams.
There are these scars. Deep scars.
There are these memories. Forgotten memories.
There are these thoughts. Untamed thoughts.
There is this wait. Never-ending wait.
And then amidst these chaos…she stands there alone bewildered.
Unable to think. Unable to feel. Unable to understand.
She stands there weak and unsteady.
She waits there for someone. For something she once knew was her’s.
She knows there aint anyone coming but she waits. She still waits.
She knows that she will just end up perishing amidst these chaos and meet the dust.
She knows.
She knows it all.
She knows its all over.
There is going to be no saving and no help .
So all she does is stand there alone. Rejected. Lost.
She stands there alone to be accepted. To be found.
Mahek Mithare
I love how you swirl in from outer senses (at the beginning) to inner senses. Wonderfully done. π
Oh, and this line: “There is going to be no saving and no help.”
That’s how I feel every day.
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Thank you for the appreciation.π
And I hope you and I get out of that feeling soon….
Sending love.β€
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Thank you.
Sending love back to you. And a smile… π
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Awww nice!!!
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Thank u.β€
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This thing is as prettieee as u r.πππ
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Says the barbie. ππ
Thank YOU.
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My story. My story.πππ
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Ayee!
Yes aamna i know. ππ
Secret. I promise.ππ
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Hi mahek u are using ask.fm?:)
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Nope i dont.
Perhaps i will soon. :’)
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Okay.
Take my word and become a writer.
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Ok. Ill try.
ππ
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Beautifully written!
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Thanks.π
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Very nicely done. I like the dynamic you used here.
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Thank u. β€β€
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I like your blog too.
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very lovely and moving, I feel this girl’s thoughts … nice work, I look forward to reading much more of your work, you are very talented! Peace and light to you… Michelle
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Thank u so much.
Means the world.π
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Amazing blog!!
Glad to connect with you.. π
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Thanks.βΊ
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Such a beautiful post! Girl you already have a fan here! β€
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Thank u so much.ππ
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When a heart in given, moving may be the worse thing. But if the heart is still somewhere else, you may hurt others hearts if you move….without closure. So, you hope alone, dwelling!!!!
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Well said. :’)
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Thanks
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Wow..that was really good!! Beautifully described:)
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Wow! Well expressed,,,,
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This. Is. Amazing β€ Nearly made me tear up a bit! π₯
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Thankies.:*
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